the voice of reason in marketing

July 31, 2010

Less words…more meaning.

Filed under: The Power of Persuasion, Writing Tips — Chris Miranda Diaz @ 11:52 am

I recently drove past a billboard on I-95 in New England which advertised an area bank.  This is all it said:

183 Years.  0 Bailouts.

How utterly brilliant.  With those “four” words, the reader’s takeaway is…this bank is sound, fiscally responsible, trustworthy, stable, and (most importantly) my money will be safe there.  Moreover, without saying a single actual disparaging word against its competitors, it clearly states:  they suck, and we’re better than them.

Audiences have short attention spans, so when seeking to persuade them, you can use fewer words by employing meaningful ones that enrich your statements beyond their actual face value.

This strategy works with all communication types, but of course, it’s particularly vital with billboards.  Look at that entire paragraph of imagery that got planted in my mind with just a 2-second glance, stolen while whizzing by on a (blissfully) traffic-free interstate.  Granted, I was doing the speed limit (40 years.  0 Speeding Tickets.) but it would have worked even if I had been driving past at 100 miles an hour.

Of course, then the need for the bailout would have been mine.

3 Comments »

  1. [...] In contrast…want to see a brilliant example of advertising?  Check out the July 31, 2010 post on redpointspeaks.com, “Less Words…More Meaning.” [...]

    Pingback by Yikes. This ad completely backfired. « the voice of reason in marketing — January 11, 2011 @ 7:47 am

  2. Problem is — the word less is horribly ungrammatical as the word fewer fades away.

    Comment by Harvey Chipkin — January 11, 2011 @ 7:52 am


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